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Kalloway ([personal profile] kalloway) wrote in [community profile] onedeadplotbunny2015-04-20 06:00 am
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[Brainstorming]

Welcome to the fourth 2015 Brainstorming Post! Feel free to use this space for any brainstorming needs you may have.

A couple of guidelines for this post--

• Everyone has a different opinion on spoilers and how long they stay spoilers before becoming public knowledge (Rosebud was his sled!) - if you are concerned with spoilers in your comments, feel free to use white-text, bumper comments, or whatever method you prefer.

• Nobody is under any obligation to use any suggestions made in this post or to credit any commenter if their suggestions are used (though perhaps if a long, productive exchange occurs, a short author's note might be nice).

• You are welcome to copy/paste your comments/requests/thoughts from a previous post.

• If you have any concerns with any content in the comments, please feel free to PM me.

(Basically, be good to one another. Happy Brainstorming!)
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[personal profile] dhampyresa 2015-04-20 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Quick everyone give me a trope, character trait and worldbuilding question you like and/or find intriguing.
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[personal profile] intersquid 2015-04-22 01:56 am (UTC)(link)
An epic journey to collect plot-significant items, an inability to forgive people, and a personal favourite world-building question, what kind of food is popular in the setting?
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[personal profile] dhampyresa 2015-04-25 10:45 pm (UTC)(link)
These are great, thank you!
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Requestiong help with action scenes

[personal profile] dialecticdreamer 2015-05-21 02:44 am (UTC)(link)
I've got a story that's got a great start, strong on description and dialogue... and the plot just STALLS OUT.

Repeat X5-- or X10, today.

Please help. Mayday. SOS.

A specific setup-- I have two acquaintances who need to connect over working with a new skill. I know the skill. I can get them into the same place, get them talking... and then it stalls out. There's no development.

I'll take suggestions for interruptions, especially.
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Re: Requestiong help with action scenes

[personal profile] the_rck 2015-05-21 08:09 pm (UTC)(link)
The instructor could give one of them a hard time over a mistake, or they could share a joke about the instructor's mannerisms.

One of them could make a mistake that produces interesting and unexpected results or that just makes both of them laugh.

They could disagree over the results they want.

One of them could have a medical emergency that the other has to help resolve, or someone else nearby could have a medical emergency and the two characters work together to help.

On the way to the class (or wherever they're learning), one of them finds an injured animal and ends up bringing it along for lack of other options.
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Re: Requestiong help with action scenes

[personal profile] dialecticdreamer 2015-05-21 08:21 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL-
You're amazing. I was in a "forest for the trees" loop-- they can EASILY disagree over the purposes for the skill as well as the results, but I wasn't THINKING of that for whatever reason.

THANK YOU.