[Brainstorming]

[kalloway]

Welcome to the first 2015 Brainstorming Post! Feel free to use this space for any brainstorming needs you may have.

A couple of guidelines for this post--

• Everyone has a different opinion on spoilers and how long they stay spoilers before becoming public knowledge (Rosebud was his sled!) - if you are concerned with spoilers in your comments, feel free to use white-text, bumper comments, or whatever method you prefer.

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(Basically, be good to one another. Happy Brainstorming!)

Comments

[wordstitch]

Have you already posted the other 23 chapters? If not, I would consider inserting more bits about the aliens throughout those chapters instead (if the story structure permits), so that it's not just one big explanatory thing all at once. But if each of your chapters is a specific POV, or have already been posted, I suppose that's difficult to achieve.

In that case, I would consider saving some of it for future chapters and working it in slowly, if it's possible (and it may not be).

What is the motivation for the aliens to invade Earth? Are they just evil, or is there some underlying reason that we--or at least the main antagonist--might sympathize with, since I'm assuming that he's a human and not actually an alien?

[the_rck]

I've been posting as I go, and most of what I've written is from the point of view of characters who have no idea at all about the big picture. They've been finding things out, gradually, and I've written some stuff from the point of view of the villains who know all about the aliens because they're allied with them.

The leader of the group of canonical villains has precognition. The way I've set it up as working is that he foresaw that the aliens would be coming and realized that working with them would be healthier, in the long run, than fighting them. He also saw that, of the numerous factions of aliens that could find Earth, this lot is the best bet in terms of humanity surviving. He believes that successfully fighting off this invasion would lead to something much, much worse.

The aliens pretty much take over any new habitable planets they find. They're expansionist and pretty certain that their civilization is the best possible and that it should be spread to enlighten the barbarians. This particular faction of aliens believes in assimilating native populations. Some factions just wipe them out and resettle the world with their own people.

There's a good chance that, if the villain group plays their cards right, they can end up running Earth as the deputies of the folks in charge of the alien empire. To some extent, that will mean they can insulate Earth from some of the negative effects of having been conquered. The actual invasion will take a couple of decades because it will start with infiltration.

All what I've just laid out is known to my readers by this point in the story.

I'm not sure I can work this in gradually. Either I do a chapter set on the capital world now, or I don't do it at all. None of the other characters are going to go there during this story. The antagonist's personal development is absolutely key to how the story comes out, and his few days on this alien world are a good time to throw him off balance and make him think. My primary focus for the chapter would be on him and on how what he encounters affects him. I can't spare more than a chapter for it, not if I'm going to move the rest of the story forward rather than have it tread water, waiting for him to return. I can't do much with the other characters until after he gets back.

[wordstitch]

I think you've just hit the right idea in that last paragraph. This chapter, set in the capital world (since you have to do it now!) can throw your antagonist off balance and make him think, and also convey all the extra info you need to convey about the aliens in one fell swoop. You can explore his motivations and also create even more suspense about the aliens.

=D Sally forth to chapter 25!!

[alassenya]

From the brief description you've given, it sounds like a massive data dump and I think it's going to be a huge stopping point which might well provide backstory but will absolutely halt the action in the major arc and may well pre-empt your climax.

Can you get around it in another way? Maybe one of the other characters can comment that he has gone to that world for training (or even just that he is absent) and then you can pick up the story again when he comes back and gradually reveal what he's learned along the rest of the story.

If you really don't want to waste your world-building (and I know that feeling, believe me) you could make up a reference document and post it separately so that readers who are interested in that level of detail can read it but it won't break the main story.

[wordstitch]

I second the last thing about the reference document as a work-around. Like an appendix of sorts! You could post it as an addition after the last chapter to tie up loose ends?